Originally Posted by
eschatological
A few notes:
3) ...Jon doesn't think strategically for a moment...
3) Jaime better be out to kill Cersei from this moment. It'll not be okay if he goes back crawling to her on his knees, and she rejects him and he rages out and kills her or something. For him to think for a moment that Cersei is the one for him is a complete reversal of his arc.
4) Sansa unreasonably distrusts Dany, which sets off in motion this whole conflict. Two people she absolutely values the opinion of (Jon and Tyrion) vouch for her, yet she's a petty bitch for no reason...
5) The whole scene with Rhaegal dying is dumb as shit.
A) First off, why are they splitting up? I would think Dany flying down the King's Road would gather more support to her cause than anything else. Plus, they know it'll separate their forces by weeks, though I have to wonder why it'll take Jon 2 weeks to get to KL (a journey which took 3 months in s1, btw), and somehow boats jetpack up and down the coast no problem. These are like, basic D&D rules: don't split the party.
B) The whole Iron Fleet hid behind some rocks, and no one noticed? It's open water, and a calm day. And somehow the first 3 ballista shots were perfect, then a whole bunch missed? That should be a highly inaccurate weapon, like........all ranged weapons over distance?
C) Dany can't circle behind them and roast them? Those ballistas don't look like they can rotate, and even if they could, they'd have to shoot past their own mast and sails.
D) Ballistas can take down ships? Man, I wonder how they engineered ballistas with that much force per square foot, yet they can instantly be reloaded and fired again, as if they're fucking sniper rifles. Most crossbow-esque weapons required winding them with a physical tool to get the tension of the bowstring taut enough to drive a bolt that hard. Of course, these ballistas don't even seem to be working on a bow mechanism. I guess you can dismiss this as "fantasy ballistas" but it was weird seeing them all fire so rapidly and accurately...
5) The "mad Dany" arc is pretty obvious at this point. I guess that's their "bittersweet" ending. I'm glad Varys gave voice to the "reluctant King" idea, but I hope to shit people don't think that's brilliant writing or anything, since the idea of the philosopher-king has been expounded on since Plato, and Marcus Aurelius outright said "The best emperor is the one who doesn't want to be emperor."...